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Should official forms use less jargon?

The National Adult Literacy Agency is calling on the Government to produce documents in ‘plain English’.

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THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD make more of an effort to provide all public information in plain English, according to the National Adult Literacy Agency.

NALA said that a recent survey it conducted found that 95% of respondents approve of such a move, noting that almost half (48%) find official documents, including information from the Government, difficult to understand.

Respondents also said that they sometimes find jargon, terms and conditions, and financial information challenging.

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The NALA petition had been signed by over 550 people at the time of publication. The organisation is hoping to reach 5,000 signatures.

The document calls for public information such as letters, forms and information leaflets to be written in 'plain English'. This means:

  • Using everyday words where possible
  • Explaining specialised terms if they can’t be avoided
  • Keeping sentences to about 15-20 words
  • Using a readable font type and size

Example

Here's an example of a standard hire purchase contract term before and after its content has been changed into 'plain English':

Before: Title to property in the goods shall remain vested in the Company (notwithstanding the delivery of the same to the Customer) until the price of the Goods comprised in the contract and all other money due from the Customer to the Company on any other account has been paid in full.

After:We will own the goods until you have finished paying for them.

NALA Director, Inez Bailey, said that "both citizens and governments benefit from clear information, written in plain English".

"Citizens are more likely to understand their rights and governments are more likely to make better use of their resources.

Using plain English can also save the public sector time, money and possible frustration by having to take repeated requests for information.

Last year Britain’s civil servants were banned from using certain jargon, such as: 'slimming down'; 'foster' and 'deploy'.

Read: One-in-10 Irish children can’t read properly when leaving school

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    Mute James Murphy
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    Sep 25th 2014, 9:57 AM

    Ah this is where I’m going wrong on tinder. Must use less jargon.

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    Mute Martin Hayes
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:06 AM

    Please, please, think of the lawyers. If everything is in plain English, how will they contest it.

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    Mute Tertullian
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:23 AM

    A jocose comment but a serious point all the same. Legal documentation in particular has to be very exact and this can often lead to very tortuous wording. It’s to ensure that there is minimal room for misinterpretation. Such documentation aside however it makes perfect sense for the vast bulk of public information to be in plain English.

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    Mute Martin Hayes
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:54 AM

    I agree, Tertullian but it’s also true that lawyers are engaged to draw up documentation that is deliberately confusing to the man in the street. This is often included in Ts&Cs and fine print, the latter being another thing that should be outlawed.

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    Mute John Ward
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:15 AM

    It’s more to the point that our education system should be castigated for producing illiterate school leavers.
    This is the proverbial tail trying to wag the dog!

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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:30 AM

    Easy on the jargon

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    Mute Gravel Pitt
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:31 AM

    Translating all EU documents into Irish – at enormous cost – is a bigger mistake. Nobody reads them, but the dead language people insist on it…

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    Mute Will Derbylight
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    Sep 25th 2014, 11:15 AM

    Although, to a degree, I support the ‘dead language’ – the cost is enormous and perverse. Insisting on the useless translation of EU documents into Irish is madness….

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    Mute Michael O'Neill
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:17 AM

    How about spending the money on making forms easier in English rather than spending money to translate them to Irish.

    VAT and tax forms are a pain in the hole.

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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:03 AM

    The Catholic Church should take note – they think that spouting old English makes a difference.

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    Mute Mrs Shalakalananaka
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:57 AM

    I thought they speak Spanish or something.

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    Mute John Moynihan
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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:53 AM

    Seriously? This is the stupidest thing I’ve seen on here we shouldn’t have to pander to the lazy and less intelligent. Like every thing else if you don’t understand then go find out what it means heaven forbid that people do a bit of work or learn something

    Also both those statements are not the same the “jargon” one also covers delivery and any other debts secured on the goods

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    Mute Michael O'Neill
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    Sep 25th 2014, 11:55 AM

    It’s not pandering to lazy and less intelligent. By making forms complicated we have to guess, fill them in wrong or hire people to fill them in for us.

    Try registering a business in CRO. It’s possible but a lot of the questions need you to ask for help. Obviously registering a business shouldn’t be done lightly but some of the questions are obtuse.

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    Mute Steve Tracey
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    Sep 25th 2014, 11:09 AM

    Where possible plain English as shown in the example in the article can reduce paragraphs so saving paper and time taken to read contracts, etc.

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    Sep 25th 2014, 10:44 AM

    Why is the NALA petition form in German, should it not be as the article states in plain English.

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    Sep 25th 2014, 11:24 AM

    I wonder if they deliberately make the wording complicated ? These forms are obviously drawn up by the legal department and should be translated into English-as- she-is-spoken so we don’t all need law degrees to understand them.

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    Sep 25th 2014, 1:51 PM

    They should just have less forms in this country full stop. I just returned after a couple of years abroad and tried opening a bank account in the same AIB branch (convienance) that I had an account in since they came into school in 6th class and gave us all one to put our confirmation money in. I got asked all sorts of shite, same with the Driving License, Tax Office, Car Insurance. Q1 provide a utility bill dated in the last 3 months. A. I dont have one R. Tough Rant Over

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    Sep 25th 2014, 2:27 PM

    Let’s just dumb down everything for generation text speak.Is dat alri wit every1? Sud b Gr8. Or just learn f&&king English! It’s a beautiful language.

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